Rosanne Dingli

Rosanne Dingli

Wednesday, October 6, 2010

The Businesslike Writer


It has long been the misconception of beginning writers that they belong firmly in the camp of art and literature. Spending a decade or two up to one's ears in word-processing programs, broken pencils, scribbled drafts and rejections slips, together with a swathe of publishing credits and awards, soon teaches a writer what it's really all about.

Writing is all about starting again. I'll say it again: writing is all about starting again. It's like acting. It's like playing an instrument. It's not necessarily art: it's more like entertainment. As part of the entertainment industry, writing is about frequent rehearsal, and about having your head in the clouds... with your feet firmly grounded in James Wood's How Fiction Works.


It's about practising, failing, and starting all over again. It's about sending a draft to one's readers, having strips torn off it, and starting all over again. It's about discovering a big hole in a plot during a discussion about your 'next book' with a friend or two, and having to start all over again.

Regarding all this in a businesslike way is the most rational approach. Even tennis and golf require frequent practice: pros will tell you about their day with a bucket of balls. A businesslike writer ought to be able to describe a similar day with a bucket of past participles, sub-plots and secondary characters. They ought to be able to swing a backhand easily using only 5 double-spaced pages and two adverbs.




Note there is no mention of passion: it might raise its head, but is to be kept firmly in hand, like passion in the office, passion in the wings, or passion while playing a pub gig. Writing is a finely-wrought skill whose results create passion. It's what writing creates as a response that can be uncontrolled, abandoned, hysterical and unrestrained. The act of writing itself, and the product that comes of it, needs as much orchestration, planning, trial and discipline as a string quartet.



Eliciting passion and excitement is indeed the job of writers, but they cannot do it by being impassioned and excitable... not while they are writing, at least. It takes about as much control, incisive choice of words, precise deliberation, and concerted effort to write a passionate scene that actually works as it does to play a successful piano concerto. One or two tries are simply never enough.

The businesslike golfer is the practising golfer: the one who out-competes the rest. The businesslike piano player is the one whose dogged determination and persistence win her that audition to play at Carnegie Hall. The businesslike writer is the one who re-writes Chapter 17 about 15 times, scraps it, and starts again.

What - talent has nothing to do with it? Artistry? Aptitude... your gift? Er... yes! But without being businesslike, without turning away from the dream of glittering prizes without application and determination, without strict discipline, and the willingness to start again, they are nothing.

10 comments:

  1. I agree. There is constancy to task, the writer pursuing completion of a manuscript. And there is the editor-in-us (for lack of a better phrase) honoring that manuscript and telling the writer to go back and retry. I have one book that has plagued me for a decade, I have wasted/spent an immense amount of time on it. I have redrafted the entire manuscript twice (first time was from the wrong primary POV, it told the wrong story. The second... well).

    That favorite author, that you no longer read, I think it is because they stopped pursuing their craft. They stopped, as you say, starting over. So we the reader get bored and move on. Keep pursuing the craft.

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  2. Yes, I'm glad you agree, Matt. It's hard work, but it works. So to speak.

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  3. I've always felt you need to bring passion to your writing, and still do. But you're quite right. The actual writing is hard, sweaty work. But it helps if you're passionate about the topic. The words flow more easily.

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  4. Oh, for sure - but there's passionate about, and passionate with... one cannot abandon oneself entirely. Discipline and hard work can't be avoided. Thanks for visiting, Jeannette.

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  5. Well said Rosanne. Myself, I prefer to let the inspiration, passion, or whatever have complete and free reign when I write. When I edit later though, that's when it's all about business and making it really work.

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  6. Yes - we all find we have to knuckle down at some stage of the game. Thanks for visitng Paul.

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  7. I found your blog through WD, and must say...I love it!

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  8. You are welcome to return - I have new material most weeks. Thank you for your nice words, CL!

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  9. Great post as always Rosanne. I find writing a piece requires inspiration, shortly followed by pain, doubt, hard work, and time. And I only free form poems!!

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  10. Hi Shane! If only those who read our work realise what we go through!

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